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Anne-Marie Louise Devoss ([personal profile] tryingtobe) wrote2017-01-04 11:08 pm

Permissions & Crit & First Impressions




๐Ÿ’” First Impressions

๐Ÿพ VISUAL: Marie has a slim build, long curly red hair, weighs about 135# and is 5' 3" tall. She has a small tattoo on the inside of her right wrist. She has a lot of scars on her back, whip marks and wounds that were never able to heal. There is a knife wound on the front of her pelvis thatโ€™s shaped similarly to part of the hunters organization. She keeps these scars hidden if possible. She also has a scare on the inside of her wrist that used to be a tattoo.
๐Ÿพ FASHION: Marie was given collars to signify her station: House Collar, Hunting Collar, Party Collar Her usual attire is a plan white dress and a corset. She is barefoot when she's inside and wearing hiking boots when she's outside.
Corsets: Home, Hunting, Bed
Dresses: Sleeveless Flare, Strap Sleeve Flare, Cap Sleeve Flare, Tighter Patterned
๐Ÿพ DEMEANOUR: She usually has shoulders straight or good posture but her head tilted down and her eyes on the ground. She rarely looks people in the eyes.
๐Ÿพ AURAL: She doesn't have much of an accent. Her tone is soft and unobtrusive and very sweet. It feels a bit like warm honey.
๐Ÿพ OLFACTORY: Marie usually smells clean and like lily's. The lighter scents on her skin, those smelled by the supernatural, are of blood and dirt.
๐Ÿพ MENTAL INFORMATION: Telepaths will have a hard time getting into Marie's head but it isn't impossible. I'm happy for people to talk with me since she doesn't have to many excess thoughts floating around her head.


๐Ÿ’” OOC

๐Ÿพ BACKTAGGING: Yes, within reason.
๐Ÿพ FOURTHWALLING: Within reason.
๐Ÿพ PHYSICAL AFFECTION: Yes.
๐Ÿพ PHYSICAL VIOLENCE: Let's talk.
๐Ÿพ RELATIONSHIPS: I would love something with Marie however it will take time. She is very broken and she'll have to learn what a healthy relationship is.


๐Ÿ’” Permissions

๐Ÿพ THE PAST: There is a lot of uncomfortable topics in her past: beating, rape, abuse, etc. If you are uncomfortable with these topics I will not bring them up in tags and I will always post an appropriate warning. Please let me know your limits, if you'd just like to talk things out or take it case by case.
๐Ÿพ TRACKING/KEEN SENSES: She is a skilled tracker and can find most. This also has to do with using her senses. Even if magic is used, she can smell/find traces of where magic has been simply because she knows what to look for and what a lack of scent can mean as well as scents that magic leaves behind. Please let me know what you're comfortable with.
๐Ÿพ SHIFTING/NUDITY: She doesn't shift often but when she does she is naked. Please let me know if this is an issue, it can easily be glossed over or simply assumed that she had clothes. Though Marie doesn't like to shift, it can come up.
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๐Ÿ’” Hows My Driving?

This is an OC but I can slip and lose her voice. Please feel free to comment on how I am doing or how you like/dislike her development. I would prefer constructive crit because I hope to become a better writer as well as creator.

Thank you.